Olivia Moody

The details were really good. (Especially in the shop during the first few minutes) If anything.. Some of it felt pointless. The character's wouldn't stop doing stupid things, putting themselves in even more danger than they were already in. **I COULDN'T STOP THINKING OF THESE SCENARIOS:** ● Having hay-fever. Half of the population would be sneezing. ● Waking up and getting cramp in your leg. ● Stubbing your toe. Even if you don't make a sound, the echo would. ● Snoring in your sleep. ***It would be absolute chaos.***