Very well made
Decent cinematography with some really nice shots and some not as clean shots
I personally think that all of the cuts were fine but having audio play over each and every cut especially with how many there are in this can be the wrong choice, everytime there was a jump cut and it was silence that played it was way better
Drags a little bit near the end
This isn’t necessarily a bad thing but I didn’t understand most of the plot until reading the plot description after which I’m not holding against the short film
Good short film!!!