Incredibly creative short film. There’s clearly a lot of depth here and especially I found the dialogue to be pretty brilliant. The swan story at the start was a great way to tie into the main narrative and I did honestly feel for the protagonist, even if it was a little confusing at times. The biggest problem I think is in the structure. The way this story is presented and edited makes it quite difficult to understand what’s happening. That being said, the message of the story was clear enough to me and I think that’s all that matters.

Incredibly creative short film. There’s clearly a lot of depth here and especially I found the dialogue to be pretty brilliant. The swan story at the start was a great way to tie into the main narrative and I did honestly feel for the protagonist, even if it was a little confusing at times. The biggest problem I think is in the structure. The way this story is presented and edited makes it quite difficult to understand what’s happening. That being said, the message of the story was clear enough to me and I think that’s all that matters.

this reminds me of Neko Mimi idk why

this reminds me of Neko Mimi idk why