78/365
Good start, very good third act and very dull middle. Maybe I’m just not paying attention but the magic in this feels very…flouncy to me? Like, I don’t get the rules. Are their ‘types’ of magic? I dunno! Lastly, Kokutou my bi king, don’t let them dull your shine.
78/365
Good start, very good third act and very dull middle. Maybe I’m just not paying attention but the magic in this feels very…flouncy to me? Like, I don’t get the rules. Are their ‘types’ of magic? I dunno! Lastly, Kokutou my bi king, don’t let them dull your shine.